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A story by Adam Caulfield I remember now, how it all happened..... How I became the saviour. I over heard a conversation that two Civilians were having; one said to the other “Aye it be a lovely day in the great kingdom” and the other man said “I agree, we have all we need to keep us happy.” I simply said to myself as I walked past
“Yeah it’s another perfect day.” Then the man said to me “what’s your problem lad?” So I replied and I said “This kingdom is peace full but I don’t want peace I want to serve I want to protect
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Destiny chapter 2Chapter 2 Then after our meal we went out into our garden and started training and I saw my sister working very hard so I said “Sister you seem to be pushing yourself to hard, pace yourself.” She replied “What are you talking about brother? I am training at a level that suits me.” So I said “Just be careful.” Then she tripped over her staff but I ran over and caught her and I calmly said “Sister Are you ok?” She said “yes Brother I just tripped.” She started to giggle and said “I’m always safe when you’re around” &Destiny chapter 2
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destiny chapter 3Chapter 3 When we returned home I decided that I was going to turn in early (after all I’d had a long day) but it turned out that sleeping was a bad idea because I had the strangest dream.... I was walking along in a dense field with a calming breeze blowing against my face and I was happy until I was disturbed by the sound of a thousand great beasts and the smell of a thousand rotting corpses burning in the heat of hell and then a man appeared and he said his name was aroich and that one day I would need his help and I started running and running and then I woke up in a sweat. I then decided to research the man called Aroich. Thedestiny chapter 3
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Destiny chapter 4Chapter 4 As we were being taken away I started thinking to myself “could the mystery attacker be connected to the strange beast and what will happen if we are found guilty?” As I looked around the cart I could see a guard sitting with us so I decided to talk to him to see if he could tell us about what would happen if we were found guilty. He said “To be honest I don’t think you did it but I have to follow orders so...” he then went on to say “if you are found guilty then you will be executed.” A shudder went down my spine when I heard those words... I knew that I had to pray thDestiny chapter 4
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Destiny chapter 5Chapter 5 After the battle I was taken to a very large room with all the lords of the land sitting in it. I was then thrust in to the centre of the room and one of the lords said to me “You have proven yourself worthy on the battle field and we are willing to make you an offer, we aren’t quite sure if you really are a necromancer or not but if you are willing to swear allegiance to our great city you will be set free and you and your sister will be made honorary soldiers in the Army of the Great Golden Alliance.” I replied “Yes I swear allegiance to our city.” And like tDestiny chapter 5
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Destiny chapter 6Chapter 6 Within an hour we were subjected to several hours of training and afterwards we were so worn out but we suspected that the reason we were so worn out was because it was our first day. The next day we were called into battle, it wasn’t a large battle but it was large enough for the general to call us all in. We were in the centre of all the chaos and we realised that this was our future. I saw my sister fighting off several different warriors at once with her crossbow but all though she was good, she wasn’t good enough to notice the warrior that was creeping up behind her so I ran with my war hammer by my side, I liftDestiny chapter 6
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Destiny Chapter 8Chapter 8 It was a bright, sunny day and a warm breeze was blowing, it was perfect weather for a coronation. I sat on a throne at the front of the church whilst the priest blessed my robes then my hammer and finally he blessed the crown and placed it on my head. I was officially the king of Mestrall. I stood in front of my people and read out a number of things that I had on my mind and I decided that we should put them all to a vote. After all a democracy is better than a dictatorship. The crowd loved me and my ideas. Later on when all the ballots were collected and counted every issue I raised was partnered with a unaDestiny Chapter 8
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so I can't do much bar go on the laptop and rest..... but never mind. More time to write I suppose.But never mind..... but Why does this allways happen to me *sobs* Hopefully I'll get better soon... *sighs*... 
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| My full name Is Adam Richard Caulfield I’m 13 My confirmation name is Leo My star sign is Leo My birthday Is the 28th of July More info.... I live in Stanley, England. I worked in a church as a altar boy for a while. I have been part of DA for 6 months and I focus on poetry and drawings. I would like to be a doctor and a author. Personal quote: “Happy, Happy Bunnies In The Happy, Happy Woods” by Me (*_*) |
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- Current Residence: Stanley, Durham, England
- Interests: Poetry, Singing, Wrestling
- Favourite movie: V For Vendetta, voces inoccentes
- Favourite band or musician: band from tv (perticually hugh laurie)
- Favourite genre of music: Rock
- Favourite artist: Van Gogh
- Favourite poet or writer: Shakespeare/Derek Landy
- Favourite photographer: Paul Caulfield (broken-angel-d)
- Favourite style of art: Anime
- MP3 player of choice: ipod
- Favourite game: star wars the force unleashed
- Favourite gaming platform: PS2 / xbox 360
- Favourite cartoon character: Harima Kenji
- Personal Quote: "My whale" by steven and me
- Tools of the Trade: pen/ paper
- Email: Adam@machinationsworld.com
ok my hero is Neox Etheral.. Butt what is the name of my villan?
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